Albatroses and Aviators!
Two edits/readthroughs later, my World War One aviation novel is all but completed. That being said, I wish to do a bit more work on the editation of said piece. Despite the fact that I love lecturing on the topic of WW1, especially my own fantastical version of it, I think the exposition in the piece needs to be cut down, with conversations paying homage to the exposition in its place.
That being said, it IS a diary-themed novel. Surely some exposition is allowed in that style? Thoughts?
